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Re: Intoxicating: Chapter One: Part Two
Read Chapter One: Part One before reading this or it won't make sense. I had to split them up because it was such a huge chapter. Enjoy! "Oh. . . ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Intoxicating: Chapter One: Part One
Author's Note: This chapter leaves off pretty poorly, as the original chapter was too long and I know you guys generally look down upon that, so I split up chapter ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Praying for a New Start
I loved this so, so much! I could practically feel the emotion seeping out of my computer. It almost seemed like a very emotional song or rap. I enjoyed that ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Daniel
The beginning was so very exceptional, it got me super excited for the rest of the writing! The last sentence of the dream was especially nice! I loved the first ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Deceitful Intent Chapter 7
I really like the description of Kaia starting it off, it tells some, and it doesn't over give information either. Very nice! I love Michael, very flirty almost cocky in ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The POV of a crazy guy
This was really. . .awkward. I'm really confused, quite offended, and don't really know what this is. First of all, Jesus was Jewish. So. . . yeah. I'm Jewish, so ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Father
Wow, this was brilliant. I can relate to this a lot. When I mean a lot, I mean I seriously felt as though I could have written this. I don't ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Father
Wow, this was brilliant. I can relate to this a lot. When I mean a lot, I mean I seriously felt as though I could have written this. I don't ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Free
This was really cool sounding. It had a great flow and I kind of just wanted to sing along as I was reading it. The song was really pretty. The ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: HON: DELETED CHAPTER
Hi guys! This chapter is no longer part of Holding On To Nothing. . . I didn't like how it fit. Thank you. Chapter One: Wondering If You Knew "Someday, ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Okay?
I liked this poem very much as far as content but as for the rhyme scheme it was almost as if it was forced to rhyme. Rhyme should come naturally, ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Holding On To Nothing: Prologue
This is my first novel/story in a year or so, but equipped with stirred emotions and haunting memories from the past few months, I thought I'd explore the writing world ...
May 18, 2011
