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Re: Elias Novak, prologue
OK SO I LIKED THE WAY YOU STARTED IT CAPTURED MY ATTENTION YOU DO HAVE A COUPLE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS:: ...bit warmer, but the warmness didn’t come. yOU PROBABLY MEANT TO ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Going Back
I liked it>>> The story was different and not something you would see everyday. Yes there was some info-dumping but it didn't weigh the prologue down that much. The intro ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Introducing....
Hey everyone!!! My name is Tay Star and I just wanted to say that I am new and ready to get started!!! I love to read, write, sing, and dance. ...
Nov 9, 2008