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*Sorry for the long wait* “Azure!” she yelped as small furry ball flew at her. She had found the little calico cat outside her house one night and they’d been ...

This review will be kind of short because... Well the story so far is kind of short. Here goes: Lightning streaked across the stormy sky. Airia sighed and turned restlessly ...

*Ok so here it goes:* Mirrors were everywhere. Raine gazed at the reflection and found herself searching. For what she didn’t know. All she knew was that the answer was ...

Hello, Correcting as I go along: Anything you have seen, I have seen a thousand times. I’ve seen everything, everyone. I make friends then watch them leave. I’ve fallen in ...

THNX EVERYONE For all the critique: Yes the good and the bad!! I will work on this a bit more to clarify the story and then repost it! Till then ...

THNX EVERYONE For the critique... Yes the good and the bad! I can take it like a G (hahaha) But just so you know I posted a bit more on ...

Thnx for the crits but this part is the prologue... you aren't supposed to know the woman yet... its just introducing everything that's why she has no name...she's not really ...

Ok I re-wrote it a little bit and added some more to it... I hope it makes a little bit more sense.... I really would appreciate every critique I get ...

This is something I wrote a long time ago:: I love the you take me into your arms And whisper that everything will be fine Even though I know you're ...

ILL CORRECT AS I GO ALONG::; It has been a year and three months since the Election of 2096, which arguably was the worst event in America's history since the ...

tHIS STORY WAS EXTREMELY INTERESTING TO READ aLTHOUGH I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT'S GOING ON (HA HA HA) I AGREE WITH THE OTHER POSTS IT DOES SOUND LIKE ITS TALKING ...

I R3ALLY ENJOYED THE STORY... THERE IS GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN THIS SHORT SECTION i FEEL LIKE I CAN ALREADY RELATE TO THE CHARACTERS.. WILL THE BOY WHO LIKES THE ...

Ok i'll correct as I go along!! They were walking together in a group, a loud, boisterous group. They looked around to find there their victim and found it. The ...

Ok so I just started on this that's why it's so short but I'm working on it. Please read over and make sure its pretty interesting. THNX :smt059 // The ...

i LOVED iT!!! i WAS CAPTIVATED FROM THE FIRST PARAGRAPH... BE A LITTLE MORE DESCRIPTIVE OR YES IT CAN GET CONFUSING THE STORY LINE WAS MOVING ALONG WELL AND IT ...