tanith14

Jetpack covered the majority of what I wanted to say so I guess the only thing I have to add is keep writing. The only way you get better is ...

So I tried this storybook once and it had great success... sadly my job as a professional reporter got in the way and I had to kill it off in ...

By request of posting them...;D Moonlight Decision Let's take a walk on the wild side, And forget all others that crossed the tracks. Let's dream up a better way to ...

Hi, my name is Tanith and I approve this poem. :ftw:

Not the morning lights or the dying days. Not the living tree or the darkened night. Nothing can be compared to you. Nothing in the masterpiece of this world can ...

The awkwardness of first love, The confusion of new feelings. The scramble of trying to understand yourself... and your "friend". I called him my first love, but I didn't realize ...

Frustration. That is the only feeling I feel when I sit down to write these days. I am a college student who has sold out to journalism and sports writing ...

Ironically, I was not the only one that had ghosts plaguing my past. Cathy, unfortunately, had just as many if not more tribulations in her life than I had endured. ...

I don’t know about you, but there is no way I think like that. Who’s writing? Do they really think like that? post dramatic stress syndrome I believe you mean ...

Hmm, I actually really like this. I haven't personally read many stories from a male POV, much less romances, and I think you have a good thing going here. One ...

Thank you for your help! I appreciate it! I have gone back and made the corrections you have requested. Very insightful and helpful. Here is part three. I changed bacon. ...

Thank you for the pointers. I will say that it is important to remember that the narrator is at least 24 (if not older). He mentions that he was 15 ...

As someone mentioned before, there seems to be an overall lack over urgency. Make the conflict greater! Build it up higher. That is the one thing I am counting you ...

As many posters have pointed out, this isn't a parity or a comedy. You took the book and made everyone hate each other. Granted, a few of the parts were ...

Dear reader, This will probably be my last journal entry of my life for I no longer find writing to be a remedy. You see, dear friend, I am moving ...