tanith14

Whole Face Genocide The tip of a nose. The tip of a nose extending forward slightly to the left. On the tip of that nose is a little red blotch ...

Cheers! I really liked this piece, but there are a few things I would change up. You currently have too many words, which makes the piece very choppy Here's how ...

Joined. Not really a high fantasy guy but I do love gritty, dark fantasy

I'll bite. School's out in a week and I will want to get back in the saddle again after taking a seven month break from "fun" writing. I've heard I ...

It's always good if the villain has a knack of bringing out the worst in the protagonist(s). Absolutely. If you have read Cormac McCarthy's The Road there is a man ...

My advice, never post something online you are going to regret posting if someone steals your idea and publishes it before you can get an agent. Seriously, I had this ...

:shock: Well I'm officially sad! And I was having such a good day too! :cry: I guess that is what you were looking for though...

Tolkien invented his own language! Even if he was influenced by other authors and mythologies he still had a unique world that no one could have come up with before ...

The above poster basically said everything I wanted to say, so I will leave it at this: don't be discouraged. Writing takes patience and experience. You mustn't get offended and ...

It overcomes me like a sun-washed Himalayan peak. Perhaps I might blame it on our age of sins But in the end, it is I that wronged. The avalanche starts, ...

The wind sent you a kiss in shape of a shiver across the nape of your neck as she tapped her cigarette into the ashtray across from you. I like ...

Well, first off this is VERY small sample. So small I am afraid to comment on it in great detail. But here we go There was a constricted and seemingly ...

The style was nice. I loved how you went from complex thoughts into very simple, single word lines. Nicely done. I have an issue with the choppiness (sorry if someone ...

Hey, This is my second poem. It's really just an exercise out of a book I'm reading, but I thought I'd post it anyway. It's a narrative in a sonnet ...

I won't be around for a few days, so please keep posting in my absence. My mother just had surgery and I need to get back home to check in ...