talkingbird

A few suggestions: This story is all telling, almost no description unless your aiming for a story like What My Mother Doesnt Know, which is all narrative poetry. Also, how ...

Thanks for the reviews! And yes, I know this isn't a short story, but I wanted to post it here to get some more feedback because I wasn't getting any ...

This isn't really a short story, it's an intro to a much longer one, i just wanted some feedback. You can find the rest under novels and novellas, but right ...

Waiting for the Breeze Introduction The town, by definition, was a façade. Its semblance depicted a place where kids of well-to-do parents lightheartedly hang out in the town center and ...

I love the first two, it's very cute. The second one... not so much, it seems more like a silly picture rather than something for a contest. I like there ...

It's true, it does look like a giant blob of trees, but I like that. It's very indie rock artish, and kind of adorable for some reason.

For characters, dont just describe there outward image, describe their emotions, actions, and thoughts in not just a surfacy way, but also tell why. Try to write something about there ...

For characters, dont just describe there outward image, describe their emotions, actions, and thoughts in not just a surfacy way, but also tell why. Try to write something about there ...

just saying, ur icon is amazing. ahhha did someone say dracoooo malfoyy?? lol vpm