talkingbird

Good point. I'm usually a grammar freak, but whenever I write poetry, I just always forget... haha thanks!

thank you! And yeah, I agree after reading it over... I really haven't looked at this since it was assigned in class.

This is a poem I wrote in response to the House on Mango Street... so it might make more sense if you have read the book. Like I kind of ...

A Poem I wrote for school obviously a while ago about Egypt 18 days –revolt But for a while this not a revolt This is disobeying children Blocked Being disciplined ...

This is more a REFLECTION on the book, not a review And so she spent her life By the window Waiting Hope Under the streetlight Somewhere When will the star ...

Raw Art Where thick, charcoal arms reach out to sheets of water color, and acrylic clings to its canvas; where fingers make quick stabs at keys and clutch onto pencils, ...

Closet doors open Drawers part their lips Waiting for us to shed our winter layers So we thaw from the ice Shake the early sunset off our backs Pluck snowflakes ...

Thirteen Reasons Why by Jay Asher. It may not have been the best writing one might have seen, but the story is so touching. It's a depressing book, but Jay ...

-Wintergirls -13 Reasons Why Wintergirls by Laurie Halse Anderson (same person who wrote Speak) It is not you typical shallow teen book, it is about a girl with anorexia, and ...

I feel like some people would say this book is 16+ but I dont. I think everyone should read this book. Wintergirls by Laurie Halse Anderson One of the BEST ...

This is really really good! In my opinion i think in the first few paragraphs you used the word happy to much, but that might just be me because i ...

ooops, sorry, I posted that comment by mistake :P

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Wow, I really like these horror stories. But like the other one, describe the relation between the characters and develop them a little more. Also, some parts are a little ...

Wow, this sent chills, and I could totally feel what the narrator was feeling... kind of creepy. But yeah, like the other reviews said, I think this story would be ...