talkingbird

This is really good! I especially liked this part: An eye within a mind that doesn’t watch I don't know... That line is just so accurate i guess! My only ...

Wow, this was really interesting and good! I don't really have many critiques, and I don't want to repeat what others above have said. The only thing though... "We borne ...

Part of a collection of poems inspired by uncommon strangers Flicking glass with cold fingers, Though eyes are better For communication. She does not see me, A girl in the ...

Wow... like... this is REALLY good. These were y favorite parts: I heard that insanity is more of a repetition than anything else. Continuing actions past the used by date ...

Um... well I haven't written in a while... Amnesia-- Conquering our land And annexing cities. It's weapons spare our skin; There's something deeper than flesh. Yes-- We ache. We scream. ...

Wow, I like the length. I think this is so real. I admit, I thought it was going to be really angsty and cliched, but it's not. It's short and ...

New poem...mehh... About myself, I guess. Tell me what you think because I really don't know what to think myself! If you criticize, please be constructive! Living by the sea, ...

Thanks! I actually really agree with your suggestions, I'll play arous with it :)

Um... I like some parts of this, but I'm not sure about others... There's a story behind this, just so you know parts that seem to not make sense like ...

The second to last stanza needs some work... suggestion??? This is revised from Through the Window... I only fixed that last 3 parts, though, and basically rewrote the last half ...

Thanks, guys!

Ok, this is kind of rough and I'm not sure what to think. It's kind of all over the place. It's like 3:00 am, so I'll probably wake up tomorrow ...

I know, it's a Polaroid camera and there really is no way to prevent that with the one I have. I kind of like the effect it gives though...

Polaroids from the summer This one is actually interesting, because when I first took it it was completely under exposed. About 3 months later, this is what it looked like. ...

just some things I did over the summer... 1. "I am dead to them, even though I once flowered" - Sylvia Plath (Yeah... I know the eyes are too big.) ...