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Again, it had paragraphs and structure and no double spacing when I uploaded it, but something went wrong when it got published. I'll try to fix that. Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback! To address some of the general issues, I didn't mean it to be doublespaced. It was fine when I uploaded it then this happened. Also, it ...

Thank you so much! And thanks for the welcome, I'm so glad I found this site. It's truly wonderful.

Thank you c:

Actually, fish can be pluralized as fishes. It mostly depends on where you're from, and whether you're talking about species of fish or fish within a species. But the easy ...

I love this! I can't think of anything to fix, so this isn't a review, but please, continue writing! c:

I'm both glad and sorry that you could relate... I wish no one had to feel ignored. It's such a terrible feeling. I've never been the shy type, so it ...

I loved this story! As Questio said, it was chilling enough to be interesting, but not so much as to be dismissed as impossible. The ending, however, was a bit ...

Thank you so much! I skimmed most of this, but I'll go back later to find specific edits to make. This was a story I wrote pretty late at night ...