tRiCk

The biggest thing I noticed was the spelling mistakes. Here's the list of misspelled words: O - Oh Dam - Damn Strait - Straight Say's - Says ... its not ...

Thanks a lot for the reviews! I've changed the word "insistently" to "incessantly" as was the advice of Merlin34. It really does sound a lot better with that word changed, ...

First of all, I'd like to say that I am also trying out a fantasy story for the first time and it is indeed hard. What I noticed about your ...

This is actually a story I started two years ago. I've been wanting to continue it so any reviews would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, tRiCk The streets are dark and ...

Thanks!! Maybe I'm being too critical of my work. If you could, I'm posting something in action/adventure. It'd be great if you could review it. tRiCk

Will this be a continuing story? If so, I'd be glad to read and edit the next one. There was a couple spelling mistakes, "Specs" = specks. "Thru" = through ...

Honestly, I am not really satisfied with this intro at all and I may rewrite it. Thanks for the review. This gives me a lot of insight and makes me ...

The visitor Chapter One: The Salas Emissary Cody grew up in the country of Aisling as an orphan. Her deceased father had been the head of the Palace Guards and ...

This is the best short story I've read on this site so far. From beginning to end I was completely engrossed. And I love the way you ended it, very ...

This is quite a different type of writing than I'm use to. It captures the humor of the teen( and ultimately, you) very well. There was only a few mistakes ...

Amazing! The only thing that could be corrected is that in the beginning you used the word nervous a lot. Here are some sentences that I have refined just as ...

Wow, this story is great. I've even tried reading the twilight books and wasn't that interested. I suppose because it seems more grown up and more dark. I can say ...

I'd like to first start off by saying that romance stories are not my area of expertise. Well, honestly I have no "area of expertise" but Romance would definitely be ...

Like Stella said, the space before each dialogue was really irking me. Ha ha. Looks like your previous reviewer got pretty much everything. It was real good for a first ...

Well, repost it quick or people will keep complaining on how small it is! :D