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Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Three]
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May 3, 2011 -
Re: Broken Away but not Freed Chapter One
omgg your stories are once agian AMAZINGG !!! yOU have such talent as a writerrrr (: keep these stories coming, especially this one !!! You are PHENOMENAL!!!
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
First of all, very good piece over all. A few grammer mistakes and a fw spelling mistakes but other than that, you have a plot (: Very good. I was ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: The Descendants - Prologue
hey i love this piece ! yOUR such a good writerrrr reviewwww minee (: plzzz
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Shine of Darkness
hey i love your works (: your such agood writer omggggg !
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Two]
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Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter three)
Very good once again! =] I'm getting addicted to your strories !
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Liar Liar (1)
Very good- very sarcastic. Made me feel like I was in a teen movie ! (: It's a break from all the supernatural B.S- Twilight ugh- thats clouding up the ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter two)
Really good, once again ! You definetely have the knack to write ! But I'm a little confused as the WHAT exactly is a Chi? Is it somebody's spirit? Is ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter one)
Really good ! Immediately hooked me from the beginning. First sentence kicks major butt- hence, yet again, why it hooked me in =] Loved it from the first sentence. What ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Broken Spirits
I REALLY liked it. Kind of vague but it immediately hooked me in. Honestly, at first, I thought this was a dream. I thought the girl was going to be ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Darkness of The Heart
I really like the beginning- it works well with what your writing! Keep up the good work and it started off really good. Not so suspenseful, but it was good ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: White Demons Prologue
hey this is rly short but rly rly good (: I was holding my breath through the entire thing ! Your a kick-ass writer, but you should rly work on ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Joy [Prologue]
i like the way you writer, always -] keep going at it bc your rly good !
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter One]
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