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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Three]

    -Removed-

    May 3, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Broken Away but not Freed Chapter One

    omgg your stories are once agian AMAZINGG !!! yOU have such talent as a writerrrr (: keep these stories coming, especially this one !!! You are PHENOMENAL!!!

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Effect

    First of all, very good piece over all. A few grammer mistakes and a fw spelling mistakes but other than that, you have a plot (: Very good. I was ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Descendants - Prologue

    hey i love this piece ! yOUR such a good writerrrr reviewwww minee (: plzzz

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shine of Darkness

    hey i love your works (: your such agood writer omggggg !

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Two]

    -Removed-

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: vengeance (chapter three)

    Very good once again! =] I'm getting addicted to your strories !

    Apr 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Liar Liar (1)

    Very good- very sarcastic. Made me feel like I was in a teen movie ! (: It's a break from all the supernatural B.S- Twilight ugh- thats clouding up the ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Vengeance (chapter two)

    Really good, once again ! You definetely have the knack to write ! But I'm a little confused as the WHAT exactly is a Chi? Is it somebody's spirit? Is ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Vengeance (chapter one)

    Really good ! Immediately hooked me from the beginning. First sentence kicks major butt- hence, yet again, why it hooked me in =] Loved it from the first sentence. What ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Broken Spirits

    I REALLY liked it. Kind of vague but it immediately hooked me in. Honestly, at first, I thought this was a dream. I thought the girl was going to be ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Darkness of The Heart

    I really like the beginning- it works well with what your writing! Keep up the good work and it started off really good. Not so suspenseful, but it was good ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: White Demons Prologue

    hey this is rly short but rly rly good (: I was holding my breath through the entire thing ! Your a kick-ass writer, but you should rly work on ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Joy [Prologue]

    i like the way you writer, always -] keep going at it bc your rly good !

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter One]

    -Removed-

    Mar 16, 2011


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— Hafiz