sylverdawn

*Alright I've got my Prologue scene down and here it is. Read it through and tell me what you think. Personally I think I nailed their personalities pretty well.* Persecution: ...

*I have a hard time writing in first person. I'm used to third person so I'll stick to that.* Rhyder: "In the meantime, I'll start searching these bodies. These soldiers ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf's lips twitched in amusement as he watched Arthur kiss Eve. Apperantly he wasn't the only one who had stopped being dense in the romance department. He ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf smiled and reached out, cupping Lidz' face. He kissed her quickly and then pulled back smiling crookedly at the stunned look on her face. "Thanks Lidz." ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf twisted and turned, clouds roiled around him and there was no earth beneath his feet. He was pelted by howling winds and flashing lightning. Thunder cracked ...

*I have a very good twist in mind. I think you guys will like this. Will be a long post, bare with me.* Leu de Ardere- Leo: Leo studied Lidz ...

*Rhyder's actually very controlled he's only striking out at the soldiers. Granted the rest might get a little wet, okay soaked but a that's all.* Rhyder: The fighting was starting ...

Rhyder: Free at last Rhyder jumped off the horse, keeping a tight hold on his pack. No way was he letting that thing out of sight. His wings flared outward ...

Rhyder: Rhyder was impressed, though he'd never admit it. The fae handled himself like a profesional. His movements were quick and graceful, striking only for a descisive blow. Scowling Rhyder ...

*My basic idea is that the person who made the Relics is still alive. Since, y'know even mortal Fae live for several centuries. Now that the Relics have resurfaced he's ...

Tyrnan Grady: The Hideout- Tyr watched Rhys glance away from him and crouch down next to Kodi. All the other resistance members crowded around her like lost little lambs while ...

*Sorry I haven't been on. Will try and post shortly.*

*I'm going to get theis fight started since the rest of you seem more interested with having your characters try to kill each other. Maybe I can take the edge ...

Okay this thing is turning into a bit of a scramble. What with all the characters going off in different directions and contradicting one another. My advice is to just ...

*I am am going to throw in a twist. I think you'll like it and yes I know this is out of character for Leo but he's that worried about ...