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*can I still join?* name- Azrayel (Ray) group- has not chosen yet rank- none yet species- half demon/half angel gender- male appearance- history- The son of a demon and an ...

*I know, but I don't have the points to make a DT. For the plot what happens is that shortly after all the characters meet. Someone tris to assasinate the ...

Azrayel- He watched the sailor warily before glancing towards the soldier. Ray kicked a chair out and nodded at the man. "Go ahead." Ray stated quietly. "I don't know about ...

Azrayel- He gave Tanner a lop sided smile. "I'd like to. But I'm kind of here on business." Ray stifled a laugh at Tanner's look of mock horror. "You? Working? ...

*Can Tanner and Ray know each other, since they grew up on the same island?* Azrayel- The storm was getting worse, whats more Ray sensed the touch of another Storm ...

*alright just so everyone knows where they are, lets just say all the characters are on Karov. Those of us in town should "meet" at the inn.*

Azrayel- He stifled a laugh as he watched the girl and the tiger lose themselves in the crowd. The theft was expertly done. A flash of red caught the corner ...

It's actually a pretty interesting beginning the prologue is something else it makes you think that your breaking from the mold here as it were, the main character is no ...

Azrayel- Ray landed in the town square, and glancing around the large port town. Karov was mostly jungle, with several small villages hidden in its depths. But the only town ...

*yeah sure, and go ahead make up the customs. But they're different from island to island.*

*just so everyone knows, Ray is the spitting image of his dad, so any high ranking officer in the empire would recognize the resemblence.* Ray- He ducked into the room ...

*alright even though some other have started already everyone else can start now.* name- Azrayel (Ray for short) age- 17, the son of the traitor brother, although his dad doesn't ...

It's very interesting, the culture is very developed and intrigueing it feels very real. I'l definetly continue to read this series. Although you should maybe show some of Drake's memories ...

plot : The sky world of Krysta was once a united realm, ruled by the royal family. The sun shone and the people flourished on the islands in the sky, ...

A really intriguing beginning It makes me want to read more, just one thing. You should focus a bit more on the main character. You don't really connect with her ...