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Azrayel- Things were really confusing, it was clear even to Azrayel, who spent more time in the desert then the towns, that the tension between the two rider factions was ...

*ack they loaded at the same time, just say this is before Ciru showed up.* Azrayel- Ray shook his head. The buzzing in his ears had stopped, glancing at Taiou ...

Azrayel- Ray stretched his arms over his head yawning. Yoru lifted his head, testing the air. "We are being followed." "I know. Several of them. Dragon Riders are rare enough, ...

*One thing Taiou is more orange-gold in color I've got their dragon pictures now too. Taiou looks like this. , His brother looks just like him only blue in color. ...

Azrayel- He smiled at the elf girl, it was nice to talk with other elves, but once they realised he was a half blood they almost always treated him like ...

Azrayel- Ray kept his hands on Taiou and Yoru as the trio watched the other riders face off. The boy and his dragon were practically hysterical, and the elf girl's ...

Azrayel- Ray kept his hands on Taiou and Yoru as the trio watched the other riders face off. The boy and his dragon were practically hysterical, and the elf girl's ...

Azrayel- Ray leaned back against the cliff wall, watching the road through the canyon for caravans. A pair of wolves came along the path and joined them. Taiou was golden ...

*Sorry about that, I meant he's a rider in the sense that his dragons chose him. He hasn't been trained yet.*

*Can my guy have twin dragons, if not I'll take one off.* name- Azrayel (Ray) age- 17 gender- male creature- half-elf rank- none as of yet, he just became a ...

Azrayel- Ray wandered along the cliff path, occasionally glancing up at the sky. The storm wasn't stopping, in fact it was getting worse. He heard a shout behind him and ...

Azrayel- Ray ran his hands through Keira's thick fur. The chase and the storm battered at him, Ray tightened his grip as his mind flashed to the day he decided ...

*Is it just me, or did I somehow end up the leader?* Seda- "In any case, make your decision and meet at the town gates in two hours." The others ...

Interesting, you did a really good job. But I think this would do better with a prologue. It raises some questions though, why did their life span shorten. Why are ...

First off really well done. I like the way you make things flow from one thing to the next, I know it can be difficult, I've got a problem with ...