sylverdawn

*sorry Layleun, got a bit confused. One other thing, all Myth-Beast's have excellent night vision.* Ilios- "Well, I'm being followed." Ilios shrugged uncomfortably, his gaze fixed on the horizon where

Ilios- Skye mentioning his own life made him remember his past. Unbidden his mind flashed back to his sixth birthday, the last time he'd been human. His parents had gotten ...

*sorry I havn't posted, lack of sleep caught up with me.* Ilios- Ilios quietly snuck up behind Skye and tapped her on the shoulder. Startled she jumped a foot in ...

*Alright we can start now, once Kitty posts her bio she can jump right in, but if anyone new joins they have to ask. Also I forgot to mention one ...

*Just so everyone knows, the story starts in a small city. Everyone is drawn to it for one reason or another. Ex: Ilios heard rumors of one of the Myths ...

*I came up with this when I hadn't slept for a week, so I'm not very confident about it.* plot: Thousands of years ago the magical races walked the earth, ...

Nicely done, I especially like how you see everything from the perspective of the owl. Although I don't quite get how it can talk. Maybe you should have it speak ...

Nicely done I really like how he reacts when he comes back from the dead, many of the books I've read where that happens the guy just wakes up and ...

So the hero revives, nicely done. I like the setting for this part of the book, let me guess it's of between this life and the next. I don't really ...

Well done. It's slightly confusing, but in an interesting way. You made did his death very well, if a bit cliched. The hero always dies with a smile on his ...

This was really well done I like how you portrayed Kar and Orient. They seem like really interesting characters. You jump right in to the action of the story, it ...

Great work. You did an excellent job introducing the new characters, I like how the siblings stick together. The protective big sister with the trouble making twins, as younger siblings, ...

I like how this is going, you have a good flow and should keep it up. You did a good job describing the school yard and his home, how it's ...

I like it, it's a good solid start, the characters are interesting. I don't really get the fantasy angle yet but I figure that will come in later. I think ...

*My internet's been down for the last couple days, and I am totally lost, someone bring me up to date please.*