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Persecution Chapter 1- Prisoners of Fate: Outline- Divided into 4 scenes- This is my take on the Chapter from Rhyder/Seiya's view points. Will load scene one shortly. Scene 1 - ...

*The last one was really enjoyable. I'm totally in for a sequal using my old characters. I have tweaked there profiles a little and added some information for the time ...

*One thing, Rhyder's anti-social problems have more to do with him being a Skylord then any effect from the mirror.* Rhyder: Rhyder eyed the group out of the corner of ...

*Am going on vacation tomorrow but I should still have fairly reliable internet access. It shouldn't be too big a problem. Will post before I leave.*

*Will now try and get the main plot going. Also Noelle I'm pretty sure Alekan doesn't have a human form. He is a griffin after all. I don't think he ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: So now his birth mother was dead as well. Unlike the family he had known and grown up with though. He grieved more for the lost chance ...

*Maybe we should jump forward a couple of hours in the story. It might help this thing take off.* Reseph: Reseph shivered under the blankets and opened feverish eyes to ...

*Will post shortly.*

*Alright I've got my Prologue scene down and here it is. Read it through and tell me what you think. Personally I think I nailed their personalities pretty well.* Persecution: ...

*I have a hard time writing in first person. I'm used to third person so I'll stick to that.* Rhyder: "In the meantime, I'll start searching these bodies. These soldiers ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf's lips twitched in amusement as he watched Arthur kiss Eve. Apperantly he wasn't the only one who had stopped being dense in the romance department. He ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf smiled and reached out, cupping Lidz' face. He kissed her quickly and then pulled back smiling crookedly at the stunned look on her face. "Thanks Lidz." ...

Lup Eoliene- Wolf: Wolf twisted and turned, clouds roiled around him and there was no earth beneath his feet. He was pelted by howling winds and flashing lightning. Thunder cracked ...

*I have a very good twist in mind. I think you guys will like this. Will be a long post, bare with me.* Leu de Ardere- Leo: Leo studied Lidz ...

*Rhyder's actually very controlled he's only striking out at the soldiers. Granted the rest might get a little wet, okay soaked but a that's all.* Rhyder: The fighting was starting ...