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I looked curiously at the elf, I couldn't help being impressed, the girl had found them even when I'd suppressed my aura. Shrugging I snapped the ropes of air holding ...

*I know, it's just an advantage she has when fighting the Red Oak wolves, whe's still smaller then Blood Mountain* Flame laid back her ears and glared at the other ...

Squall looked at the others and tried to stifle a smile, these people were pretty interesting. Quickly she stood up, stretching stiff muscles. "Relax i've been blood poisoned before myself ...

*a question, can there be two seperate links for the spirits? Like can we talk privately with them, but if we want the spirit can talk to others as well* ...

I raised my eyebrows when I was Fire coming back, trailed by an Avian girl. Judging by the way Fire was rubbing his nose, the pair nearly had an inflight ...

Flame snarled and twisted around to throw the other wolf off her she slashed the other wolf across the muzzle, and bit into her ear. Using the fact she was ...

Flame turned around so that she could see both of the wolves, making sure her escape route wasn't cut off entirely first. She glared at the new wolf who took ...

*is this ok?* name- Flame gender- female pack- neither, she's a lone wolf, for now. rank- none, or alpha of a pack of one. age- 1 year, so she's like ...

I took a swig of water from her canteen, and poured the rest over my head to cool myself down. Fire soared near the treetops, his small shadow flitting over ...

*I know it seems like two characters but these two are joined at the hip, literally inseperable, Fire can't go more then 200ft from Rain outside of battle.* name- Rain ...

Ras peered over Ryan's shoulder, studying the screen curiously. Now that she was calming down she was acting more like herself. A temperamental hot head, more likely to fight a ...

*one issue, my character is a girl* Kal stiffened, she'd missed it when she was in the trees but now she could clearly see, that the group had magical creatures ...

(K i'm changing my viewpoint i'll be in first person instead of third person now) I stifled a laugh, these people were pretty interesting, it had been a long time ...

Ras looked at the others, she didn't blame them for not realising what they were getting into. SHE didn't want to know what they were getting into. "Karana? Caley told ...

thnx for the crit, I know this story is really confusing at first, a lot of the stuff is build up for later in the book, if the way they ...