syd552

i love this one but some things i dont understand by the way i love our pictutre so yeah im not very good at crditing so other then that good ...

This is really good, its obviously about our grandma. so i think that i agree with the first commenter and some of your lines are too long . but other ...

such anger

Eat lunch Go to class study study what a drag what is this day? that i say why it is school what other place? School is but a hall of ...

[/u]Verse 1 Thought i was alone you came Thought i was betrayed you stayed Thought that i was going through life... without anything [u]Verse 1 Bridge thing Thought i was ...