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Re: The Last Day
Hi Icy, Thank you so much for your review and your constructive criticism! I will definitely look at ways to make my pacing serve the story more. Thank you again!
Mon Oct 07, 2024 1:21 pm -
Re: The Last Day
Hello GreyHound26, Thank you for your wonderful review. I%u2019m so glad you enjoyed my story, even if it was a sad reaction overall! I wish I could say all of ...
Mon Oct 07, 2024 1:20 pm
