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swrites16

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Last Day

    Hi Icy, Thank you so much for your review and your constructive criticism! I will definitely look at ways to make my pacing serve the story more. Thank you again!

    Oct 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Last Day

    Hello GreyHound26, Thank you for your wonderful review. I%u2019m so glad you enjoyed my story, even if it was a sad reaction overall! I wish I could say all of ...

    Oct 7, 2024


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