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Time question all fixed :D Thanks! Hexachord- section 2 (numbering excludes the prologue) When she returned from her ride unscathed, she felt a twinge of annoyance. So much for him ...

Don't worry, Cloasia does have a purpose. We'll see if you get to see it in the next seg- not sure how long it will be or how much it ...

Hey Box :D It's a little late, but I'm spontaneous like that, so bear with me. I saw the title of your thread and busted up laughing, so I decided ...

Hehe welcome; I loved the Crucible when I read it, though admittedly that was a few years ago. And I'm majoring in English also, though I'll be a college freshman ...

Hey :D Thanks for the crit. It's the first "chapter"; the first post was technically a prologue. I hesitate to give these segs the label of "chapter", because this story ...

Hey, I got another one to do, forgot about that... aheh. Sooooo.... I like this one. I have to echo others in that I like the description and the negative ...

Ok I'm here! Hehe exams... no, I graduated- what, the 15th? Something like that. But I have come to this thread to make up for my slacking, so give me ...

Thanks for the crits everyone :D I got more than I expected, so that was a pleasant surprise. In answer to your question, Baroness, 'trews' are pants, basically, but more ...

*sigh* I've been so remiss, and I know it. To prove to you that I have been doing something with my time, I have decided to post for you all ...

This is part of the fantasy piece I've been working on, from which I take my name :D However, you'll find that whereas I walk into walls, the chick... well, ...

rofl omg too funny, just like the other one. With all that soft and poetical feeling i didn't see the physics thing coming; that was hilarious. I'm sorry, but I ...

O.O glad to see I was useful *blush* I just read over the revised, and I love it. Really well done, and I can tell you thought out and used ...

...should I be afraid to ask what's cooking? Maybe it's just my morbid mind, but... hehehe sorry; anyway.... I read all the others, but I don't think I posted on ...

First of all, I have to say this- I love you for pming me every time you post a new one. That is extremely helpful. :D I like this segment. ...

Ah man, conflicting messages! Don't tell me he set a word limit or anything?! Those are the bane of my existence. And no worries on the furnishing thing, just work ...