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this story has more twists than you expect later in the story MY GREEN TEA LATTE CHAPTER ONE If there was something in the world that could reverse time, I ...

Amazing. I thought it was very expressive and emotional. i absolutely loved reading it and i would want to read more of these poems. i was wondering if some typos ...

this is a beautiful piece of poetry you have written here. you use a lot of imagery which adds to the tense atmosphere you created. I love the last three ...

Hi guys, i'm starting a novel and this is just a very short prologue. Prologue: Once, I daydreamed like many other girls that I would find Mr Right. But I ...

You have written an interesting composition and you have made good use of literary techniques such as repetition. However a good suggestion is to polish it a little because too ...

hey, wow, you have written an interesting story here, with lots of twists and suprises! You had a few typos in your short story and i wasn't very sure if ...

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i really enjoyed reading your short story. to start off, you really captivated your audience with a bold and descriptive beginning of the setting. you really conveyed your message of ...

i think that it is a beautiful and illustrative peom. i really liked reading it and i think you are a great poet. it is a great collection of metaphors ...

hi guys, i was wondering if someone could help me out...if you reply to someones short story, is that reviewing? because i reviewed to posts and my coins have stayed ...

i liked your prologue of the novel and i think it is an excellent beginning. there is a lot of places where the reader has to infer and yes, i ...

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One day, she wanted to dance in one of the most prestigious dance companies in Australia. Her ballet teacher once said that this dream, for some it will always remain ...