sweethearts

Love in the Rain Outside the window The weather is like your everchanging expressions It is raining Every teardrop I shed is yours And then I see you A thousand ...

I really liked chapter one and i want to read more. It was a little short for me but maybe because i wanted to read more :) As an interested ...

I quite like your title and the whole theme with the props. Your story really communicated important messages such as family relationships and drugs, alcohol etc. To be honest, i ...

Noelle, i think it was a great chapter! True, it is short but it adds to the suspense to story and makes the reader want to read more! However i ...

I know i have written this not like like a short story format but this is the best way i can express the character's emotions Did you ever realise that ...

I was really captured by the title of this piece of poetry, but when i read it, i was really amazed at the extensive vocabulary you used. Maybe I'm just ...

Hi, thanks for your lovely review. Yes, that was on purpose. :) It would be nice if you could review the first chapter and prologue of my new novella :)

Autumn The crippled leaves are dancing in the wind You went and left me behind Winter The snow has blinded my vision, I cannot see the path ahead I wonder ...

Hey Noelle, I thought it was an amazing follow up on chapter one and i loved reading every single bit of it! You have used so much description to show ...

Hey Noelle, I loved reading your story, your idea was very original adding romance to an adventure. Please PM me when you post chapter 2, i really can't wait to ...

thanks for your advice, to be honest, this was a school project on multiculturalism and i didnt have any short stories to post on YWS so i used this. Maybe ...

hey guys, i was wondering if YWS is only for a particular country or is it global? sorry, just curious!

I think what you wrote here is very correct and your advice to high school students is very helpful since it is based on your own experiences. there isn't much ...

I think that you have written a really beautiful and emotive poem here. I am not sure what your meaning was in this poem but the way i interpreted it ...

Thanks for your review and i am very glad that you like it! Would you like me to PM you when i post Chapter two? The sudden tense change or ...