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Xena, you hit the nail on the head. Satirical? No, except for possibly having the aliens come from Mexico. An intentionally pointless stab at humor--apparently not a very good one? ...

I'll tell you right now: this is terrible. But that's kind of the point. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sometime in the near

Your description of the setting is great, but most everything else is described pretty vaguely. Like 200397 said, its good to keep the reader wonder. Most of it can be ...

Since I joined this site two weeks ago, all I've done is read other peoples' works, but a couple days ago an amazing and revolutionary thought occurred to me. Maybe ...

That's okay. I almost did the same thing last night with my first attempt with a reply. We all have our moments. Just do as Saint Razorblade said--I think. I'm ...

A lot of the story sounds more like poetry than prose. I'm new here and don't really know what most of the sites' posts look like, but I can honestly ...