sunxkissedxme

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

This is a random piece. It was just a spur of a moment thing, I didn't do any editing yet. You must truly hate me, my love. I told you ...

Like the people before me, this is a great first try. Kitty caught all of the mistakes I caught, but I liked it all and all. Good job! :)

This...was beautiful. I liked it a lot. Like the people before me said, there a few mistakes, but the idea and way it was written was wonderful. I liked it ...

Awesome sauce! I completely get what you mean, I feel like this all the time. God says he loves everyone, but you there are so many wrong predjudaces. I totaly ...

oooh! this gave me shivers! I love the creepiness in it, it made it beautiful, if that makes any sense. I think it's amazing! Awesome job! I hope to see ...

Wow...this was really amazing! I loved it. I'm usually not super into poetry, but this is really well done! I loved the feel of it and the wya it flowed. ...

"You cheated! That's totally unfair Vi!" I accuse. "You ran me off the edge!" "Well duh, that's the point smart one" Violette smirks leaning back on the sofa. "I guess ...

Hey, First off, I adored this! It hooked me from the very beginning. It was super sad, but I like stories that grab ahold of your emotions and twist them, ...

I really liked this story. Robert is so sweet, and the ending was amazing. I like how that got to finish the painting. This was very well done, I couldn't ...

I absolutely loved this! I actually felt the emotion rolling off of this piece! You did have a few mistakes and you repeated some words a lot, but I barely ...

thanks so much! I'm really badwith punctuation and stuff, so I'll work on that. This is chapter one, there's a prologue before it, did you read it? Anyway, thanks for ...

I've deleted this post and placed my story under general fiction since my work didn't really fit under sci-fi. search there if you're interested! :) thanks!