sunxkissedxme

I loved it. The message was so true! I think that guys and girls do this to eachother so often, and it isn't right. Why pretend to be n a ...

This is good, I liked the message it gave. good job!

thanks so much! :)

I agree about the proof-reading, awesome! The end of this chapter really drew me in, kept me in suspence. Great! Although the very beginning was kind of slow, I enjoyed ...

We all watched him get so tired, but a cure was not to to be found. He said an angel wrapped his arms around him, and murmered, "come with me". ...

Harsh? This was amazing! I can't believe this is your first attempt! Really well done, I enjoyed this a lot! Great job!

Wow...this was really powerful. I can feel the girls' pain and how she's fading into noneistance. Well done!

This is good! I have a lot of freckles, and I thought this was really pretty, and cute too! You did well, and it doesn't emphasize the freckles too much, ...

I liked this a lot! just go back and edit a bit. Nicely done!

I like it. It flows pretty well and it's really sweet. Good job!

I loved it. Very prett, well written. My favorite part, "Your skin so pale against the night....invites me to shed all that I held as swim with you in Night's ...

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D