sunxkissedxme

You're the one I always go to, when I need to cry. The one I call to laugh with, even when I want to die. Your arms are the ones ...

Wow. I really enjoyed this! It really expressed how one person would do anything for the other, and their love for them. Now for the very few nit-picks I have ...

wow! Awesome sauce! I like this a lot. Very deep and plenty dark, but I like it! I love how you didn't let the rhyming in this suck the rest ...

It's a good idea, but I feel like it's dry of rhythm and emotion. Like Dragonlover92 said, pay attention to those thing s instead of letting your focus on the ...

Thanks so much! And yes, the girl comitted suicide to be with the guy. I'm glad you liked it so much! :)

I enter the light, and find his spirit, glowing among many. I twine my arms, around his neck, and he rests his hands, on my hips. Without a word, we ...

wow! this is really deep and mysterious. I liked it a lot. You were very descriptive and I felt the emotion radiating from this. I have no complaints. Keep writing!

I really enjoyed this. It was a bold format, and you pulled it off nicely. You might want ot go back and change some things ot make it flow better, ...

I love the young, playful vibe that comes from this. It could've had a better rhythm, but I liked the simple way it was written. Good job, keep writing!

thanks!

thanks! I'll work on it, I haven't done any editing yet, thanks for the tips though! :)

thanks!

I walk through the streets, people streaking by, shapes of gray. Like ghosts, they pass through me. Not seeing, or not looking? My destination? The bus station. It's funny, how ...

This is interesting. I also agree that the ending isn't as strong as I'd like it to be, but it's really creative. Very intruiging, but it feels like there should ...

This is sad, but I guess it's supposed to be haha. :) It's really creative, and it caught my attention. It's short, but it gives everything you need to know. ...