sunnygirl40

The worst book I ever read was Missing May. It was horrible :evil: It was about a girl whose mom died and her dad made windmill things. It was awful ...

Here's only a small :) part of the first chapter tell me what you think!!! :elephant: Chapter one – Outcast I always knew I was different. No one understands me. ...

Great description of how your character feels. :!: You should change the sentence Stephen Burgendorf is my name to My name is Syephen Burgendorf it sounds better. Sunnygirl :D 40 ...

I can't wait to see where your going with this. It's kinda good but you need to work on being more descriptive. Pretend your in your characters shoes. What would ...

i am so happy :D :D :D :D :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :smt003 :smt003 :smt005 :smt005 :) :) :o :o :o

Did you ever wonder what would happen if Adam and Eve never committed original sin? Here's where we find out. :o Preface: God created man in his image; in the ...

This story is really good! I love twilight too. I read all the books. Keep writing

Hey I luv ur book. Ur star character is pretty cool. One suggestion don't describe everyone in the book. That will get kinda weird. So far it is really good. ...