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"beneath by bedroom window. As I reached the ground and I looked around to make sure that no one was around watching me sneak out of my bedroon." instead you ...

"It was an amazing shutter than ran up and down my spine." You should instead write.."It was an amazing shutter of happiness that ran up and down my spine." otherwise ...

"It was an amazing shutter than ran up and down my spine." You should instead write.."It was an amazing shutter of happiness that ran up and down my spine." otherwise ...

A small glimmer of tears rimmed Kate’s eyes as the bright lights of the hospital jerked out the calmness of the dark it once was in. that sentence was really ...

“Not if we just take it.” if you said instead "We could just take it." that would make more sense in that sentence. Amato was Kate's friend since 4th grade. ...

it’s kind of late to be asking, my buddy Tom was supposed to come its like a run on sentence, you should make it...i know its kind of late to ...

James imagined they where screaming... it should be "they were screaming" “GO AWAY WE DON’T WANT YOU HERE"... for that you should take off the caps and put an exclamation ...

before you read this, its like one of those books that each chapter is from a different persons point of view..there will be more..eventually haha. Kelly: Nate Wellington was a ...

this is a really incredible story but i believe that at the end you need to leave alittle bit more to the imagination, like its pretty obvious that he dies ...

this is really good, i really enjoyed reading it. are you making a new section??

Haha okey dokey, i like to write contemporary realistic fiction, my favorite author is lurlene mcdaniel, im a cheerleader, yes i like bubblegum, no i hate clue...its confusing lol, and ...

haha i have no clue how to do anything on here :) maybe someone can help me outt? haha. ok.