summergrl13

Yeah! Still lovin' all the chocolate! Woo! Go choco and go teh wozzinator!!! 0(o.o)0 (The monkey's still hottttt;)!!)

I think it's interesting and I'm gonna have to read the other chapters now;). Just reading it makes me think of chocolate so now my mouth is watering and I'm ...

This is amazing and it fills my heart with love for it whenever I read it! Don't cahnge anything about it, it's the perfect short love poem and it's absolutely ...

LOL!!! I loved it! Too funny! And judging from your Leopluridon thingy, you saw/ made the Charlie the Unicorn thing on youtube.com! I love that video! It rocks! "It's gonna ...

Cool!:). Well, I broke up with a guy almost two weeks ago because he was an immature baby and I want to get with this guy named Urie (pronounced Uh-REE) ...

You would rhyme at some parts but it wasn't very consistent. Also, this line bugged me: I'm dropping downdown Don't you need just one 'down'? Or you could do, I'm ...

This is a really weird piece and it makes no sense whatsoever! You need to make it longer, the Edward Cullens part (although he wicked hot) can go and I ...

I totally agree with cloudy.skiesx! You have to right more and I'll be waiting.

Loved it! Don't stop writing songs!

It sounds like a shorter version of the chapter in my book. Have you read my book called 'Nothing's Fair in Teen Love and War'? Because it sounds remarkably like ...

I love the story of Cleopatra! It's my favorite Egyptian tale and I adored learning about the Egyptians in sixth grade! Very good detailing and very elaborate. Nice job! 0(o.o)0

I read the book about Sadako and the thousand paper cranes too in fourth grade and again last year. It was soooo sad:.(. I think that your goal is awesome! ...

Oh ouch! I would have backslapped that girl all the way to next Friday! Good story, very gripping. It's one of the stories you just can't stop reading! Keep writing!

In the beginning it talked about the person you were talking to, then it was talking about beer and then it was talking about not sharing a beer with someone ...

I think it's fun and interesting but you spelled Samurai 'Samuria'. That was basicly my only complaint. Great job and keep it up! 0(o.o)0