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Re: Diary
This is so sad and I'm so sorry that you had to live with someone like M. It brings tears to my eyes just thinking about it. 0(o.o)0 (My end ...
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: The Twins: A Fairytale
This is really good and sadly, really sad. I loved it! You've got a real gift for fairy tales! 0(o.o)0
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: Romance/ Drama
I really think that this piece is fun and has lots of potential but you really need to go back and revise/ edit it. Especially with the spelling. But they ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: My photos--part 1
I like this a lot (well, I love all the random things.... Hey, I should write a book called "Where the Random Things Are!"! That would be so cool;D ). ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: One Last Dance
I really liked this poem! It was just amazing! Don't stop! 0(o.o)0
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Broken Soul
Every tear I cry I know is because of you as it slips down my cheek and makes a little puddle on the floor and I drown in it. Every ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Concerto for Flute
I really enjoyed this piece Snoink! This is awesome and I hope that you'll be writing more sbout this! This was pretty unique and mysterious as it left me hanging ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Bunnies!
Oh my gosh, I love bunnies and any other rodent (I hate the name rodent for that group of mammals; it sounds really degrading. Maybe because whenever people call it ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Albus.
I loved the Harry Potter series! And since J. K. Rowling isn't going to write about Harry's children but instead she's going to try a totally new series, I completely ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Firearris in pastels
I loved this piece, especially the fire but you should make the fairy's hair and outfit match it. Great job though!! I really liked this piece so keep on rollin'!
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Infinite Monkeys on Infinite Typewriters (Removed)
Yeah, monkeys! I guess monkeys can write some pretty good plays;D! I always make this mega-hott monkey at hte end of each comment so here it is; 0(o.o)0
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: When Death Kissed the Moon
I really enjoyed this piece! I think that you worked really hard on it and I loved it! Don't stop writing! This is totally unique and sort of a new ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Nothing's Fair in Teen Love and War (chapter 3)
Here comes the third chapter (sorry I couldn't get it on before. First I got logged out by mistake, then I didn't have enough money,...) so get ready for my ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: The Sun Possesses Great Beauty
I don't like how puke green the first one is and how it has too many trees in the background that block out part of the sunset/ sunrise. The last ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: alone
Yeah, it's really repitious and it's not much of a poem. It'd need to be longer, have more details, be in poem form, and it'd need some editing too. 0(o.o)0
Mar 8, 2008
