summergrl13

Yeah, the plot is nice but there's quite a few things to work on. 1. When Victor loses his job and they go to America This is just added details ...

**Oops, I forgot to add that Victoire and Maxine are French, so if you talk to them they will have a heavy accent. Also, they still live in their family's ...

It all sounds really angry. I see your point at trying to sound angry but it sounds like this song is heavy metal or screaming emo music. Either way it ...

Katie I stood up and marched to where Jeremy and the announcer were standing. The bartender scoffed at me, and looked at my pedicured nails and the make-up I had ...

Katie "Well, I'm a sorceress and I'm just looking for my true love," I said comfortably. "You mean a witch?" Venom asked raising her eyebrows. "Witch sounds evil so I ...

Katie I came to a shabby looking tavern that was literrally called 'Tavern' I ran inside to escape the rain. My midnight blue cloak and dress were already damp from ...

Name: Victoire Dupree Age: looks 21 but is 189 Appearance: long silvery blonde hair, icy blue eyes, tall and slender. She has strange vampiry markings going up her left arm. ...

*Can someone bring in Dahlia?*

Hannah She took shaky breaths as she slowly clambered up the steps. Usually she wouldn't let something like this get to her but with a place as eerie as this ...

Name: Katie Greenwich Gender: Female Age: 20 Race: witch Appearance: Searching for: her soulmate Personality: an attention grabber and always positive. She is a quick thinker and quick to recover. ...

Hannah She started to laugh nervously. "Haunted? Why would there be such athing as ghosts? Ha ha ha, I d-don't believe in ghosts," she said, gulping. "Well, you should," Tomo ...

Lark I stood up and wiped the tears away from my face and turned to them like a leader, unlike how I felt. I cleared my throat. "Okay, we need ...

Hannah She was following Jared to the room. "Ugh, I never liked hotels much, do you? The always seem so dank and musty to me. Especially this one. I haven't--" ...

Dahlia I just followed behind the humans. Every so often they'd turn to stare at me. I just grinned and waved. They whispered to each other, pointing to my wings ...

*I call James;)!* Tahlia I watched the newcomers filter in. They never seemed able to stop staring at the island. I smiled and fluttered over to them, my pink wings ...