summergrl13

Dalia/ Mistique I admit, I was a little shocked. But then I began piecing everything together. I took a deep breath and peeled off my mask. "Have you guessed yet ...

(( That's fine:)!)) Dalia/ Mistique I ran off silently, feeling against the walls for either the bathroom or an empty classroom. A little further down the hall, I found it, ...

Dalia/ Mistique "Excuse you?" she said to the person. Her usual good mood was dampened today from that surprise pop quiz she was sure she failed last hour. The boy ...

Dalia/ Mistique I sat down quickly at a table. That was too close. But, wait what if it wasn't and she just saw me in the hall or something. I ...

Dalia/ Mistique I ran down the halls as fast as I could. I had already been late to first hour, and if I was late to second I would get ...

Aww! I love this! It just looks so deep and artsy, how all the focus is on one little handful of flowers! It's good and simple, not too detailed or ...

I agree with your friends from school and I do indeed say that the shading is good and adds character to the wolf:). It's really nice, and I definitely know ...

Haha! All I can say is that I loved it for it's randomness and that the randomness is so beautiful in this piece, as I be a randomness master (it ...

Wow, ummm, this is really weird. I mean, no offence, but if it didn't say Forks, Washington and the titale wasn't Edward and Bella, I wouldn't think that it was ...

O my god!! I just read the first one too and these crack me up!! I don't have much crit so umm, yeah I like it:D! 0(o.o)0

Sure, that's great!

When should we start, and does anyone wannna be friends with Dalia:D?

Name: Dalia Sokoloff Super hero name: Mistique Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: She's about average height, just a little bit shorter. Costume: (with black knee high boots) Personality: When at ...

Hey again! First, it seems like the stanzas are not as organized as most poems, and should be a little less run-on. Again, break it up a little, but you ...

Hey Vernon! Very nice by thway, loved it! Okay, I think I noticed only a couple punctuation errors, firstly. Secondly, I'd break up the poem up into several paragraphs, just ...