summergrl13

Basically, I liked it. It has a lot of potential, but I didn't completely feel the emotion in the piece. You need to put yourself in the piece a little ...

Kat I hugged Alura one last ime as she left with Zeb. She smiled and mouthed a 'thank you'. "You know what, it's been a long day and I think ...

Kat "Fee thinks that Daemyn was controlled by Kili, so she's going out to get him back," Nik said briskly. "Better that than doing it of his own accord," I ...

Kat I hugged Des once it was over. "I can't believe you stood up to her like that! You rocked." "But we lost Daemyn," He said. "Daemyn will probably come ...

Kat I was shocked, but I went over and linked arms with him. "We're not leaving Kili. We'll staay together." I urged other people forward. Alura took my left arm ...

Kat I changed back to my human form, immediately doubling over with laughter. "What's so funny about all of this? I'm absolutely serious," Kili said indignantly, glaring at me. "That's ...

Kat I noticed Nick and Mikael not moving. I followed their line of sight, and saw Kili, watching us. "Look," I whispered to Des. "She's right there." His eyes widened. ...

Kat I felt grateful to Nick for standing up for me, but than again, bad for making Des mad. I caught up with him. "Des, don't be mad, please," I ...

Kat I sobbed. I hadn't sobbed since I was little, but I sobbed and clung to Nick as we teleported back to camp. I felt people patting my back as ...

Kat I felt myself slipping into sleep. It was so hard not to, that I finally stopped trying to and just let my eyes close. I was peacefully lulled by ...

Kat I felt, a little unhappy as his arms pulled away, but at least I was warm now. For a while we just layed on the blanket, listening to the ...

Kat, shapeshifter Markus nodded, as Nick teleported us and the camping things back where we had been only about fifteen minutes ago. I laid the blankets down gently, and Nick ...

Kat, shapeshifter I watched Kili run away, ready to shapeshift into a cheetah and drag her to the ground. I knew she wasn't done; she was never really done. I ...

Kat, shapeshifter "What happened?" I demanded, seeing Daemyn drag Kili out of the tent. "She tried to kill Fee," he grunted, trying to keep hold of the struggling Kili. I ...

Kat, shapeshifter "They seem alright, maybe a little new to this kind of thing but okay," I shrugged. Nick and Desmond nodded. It was quiet. I messed with the fancy ...