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The cave Datto and Kaira just entered was dark and spooky. It was much colder than the beach outside. Kaira stopped about 10 feet into the cave, just at the ...

The exclamation point isn't needed. Got'cha! I'll fix that... "Instead of being in a normal position in the sky, it turned out to be moving from one part of the ...

~~Frecar~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 2: A New World In an instant, Datto awoke and sat straight up. Where was he? He looked around, and noticed that he was on a b

There. I edited A LOT of it. I hope you like the NEW chapter 1. I sure hope that it's descriptive enough for ya'll!

Wow Golden Quill! This is fantastic so far. I just have one question... Anna’s whole stature seemed to tighten. “Why would he come here for his birthday dinner? I’m his ...

I think I will combine the prologue and this chapter. Thanks!

That was amazing! I liked it a lot. The biblical perspective was kinda off though. Otherwise, it was fantastic! Oh, and about the biblical thing. The Bible says, after the ...

the planet he lives on Earth? No, it's called Genoa. I changed the wording so that it sounds better. I think it was boring and confusing. Because this is the ...

Fine Aushy, I'll do everything that you suggested, and I'll even fix the spelling errors. But I will not, and I mean, WILL NOT, (calms down) change the questionmark/exclamation mark ...

Hi Sere-... I mean, Goldenquill. I thought the story was absolutely........... HORRIBLE! Too many 'buts' and 'ands'. Did you know that the name Darell is unfavored by 61% of the ...

Konnichi wa everyone! This is a topic all about me! In real life my name isn't Sugarcube888 (Obviously). Here are some facts about me: -I'm in love with Japan!!! I ...

~~Frecar~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1 - The mysterious old man. "Woah there! Don't crowd. Hey, no pushing," I said. This is something I have to say a lot. Crowds of people ga

Frecar A story based on the game. Prologue – All about me! I was the big shot of the city. I was the strongest there. My sword had slain many. ...