stupidiot92

wow... really good lyrics i mean REALLY good lyrics and i love the end just curious but what type of music is this gonna be with?

Chapter 2 A Hero’s Death After I roared, I charged the two half dragons. The shorter one flung himself at me, but I knocked him off to the side and ...

Prologue Ah, death. The thing many fear because they think it is the end of all life. Some want because they believe they will see loved ones that have already ...

As Shorti looked at the girl, there was something familiar about her, but he was sure that he had never seen her before. He then asked, "So what's your name?" ...

I don't have a straightener(not that i need it) but there are times when i feel like throwing my sisters straightener out the window cause it gets in my way ...

Will a gracious hand try to pluck me out of death’s sea, only to find I have stopped breathing too soon? Why didn’t you see me drifting out? The current ...

Someone please Cirt my work. I haven't gotten any crit in a while. The title of my book that i am working on is The Line: Re-appearing(the title of this ...

This was good. I like how you describe how ugly and horrifying the world is than completely turn it around. Rhyme and Rhythm are a bit off here, but not ...

This was a god one. The horrors of having certain freinds. I like the title and the way you described how a freindhsip gets ruined.

This poem was good, but needs a little work. The rhyme and rhythm are that good in it. I would suggest working on that and i think that is all ...

I don't think you really need to work on rhythm or rhyme. Maybe a little, but i liked this poem the way it is. I liked the way it was ...

I liked this poem. I like the ideals behind it. Also as a poem it had nice rhythm, but not much rhyme. However, i don't think you really need rhyme ...

This sounds very interesting. It is different from many ideas that have been launched. I think if you work on it that this could be very popular. I know that ...

This was ANOTHER good poem. I like how you have us feek what he/she is feeling and that he/she doesn't want to kill but has to. Anyway keep this up ...

When I stop hurting, it will be a relief. but I'd rather stay in my flesh, living in the world of misery. Heaven may bring me none, but being in ...