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fencing

now see i spell it defense because defence makes me think of taking a fence off a yard and i have always spelled it defense because i remember my brother ...

Wow Christine this was really good. Really interesting and just plain awesome. Rick, above, is a good friend of mine so yea.... Anyway i wish i could write poetry like ...

Chapter 7 A Curious Gift While I was asleep, I had an incredibly strange dream. At first I was just standing in darkness. There was absolutely no light, until a ...

This is very good. I think all the words with periods after them in the Chorus really doesn't work. I said it without periods and it sounded better to me ...

Chapter 6 Rude Hosts She looked at me, sighed, and said, “I think its best if you stay in the outskirts, at least for now.” I nodded reluctantly, turned my ...

I don't know. I don't want people to look at it and think, "Oh someone else has written a cliche hero story again." I think I am gonna stick with ...

Chapter 5 A Grim Sight When we finally got to the town, it was a macabre sight. Bodies were burning, some were still bleeding, most weren’t even full bodies, many ...

Chapter 4 Some Help I stood up and turned around because the voice had come from behind me. I saw that the woman was finally up. However, I could tell ...

This was very good. One thing i noticed though was you had a lot of description in some areas and a lack of it in others. A lot of description ...

wow i'm pretty sure i know what this poem was about and it was well written just one thing i saw both too much but never not enough you can ...

still need help with rhyme and rhythm i am not too good at those The Most Beautiful Eyes As I walked a lonely path, I ran into an eye-catching girl. ...

I've already posted these but they have been up for a while and only 40 people looked at em and no one posted anything so im hoping this set does ...

Prologue February 19, 2008 It’s my first archaeological excavation fresh out of college. We’re in Mexico in a village that is a few miles away from a bog where a ...

Thank you all for editing this especially tonysdg for it being your first. I will edit this when i can(hectic holiday season). I have gotten no reviews for chapters 2 ...