stupidiot92

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

i am posting this cause my other stuff when they got commented their veiws soared!

Hey guys, Thanks for the responses though i really wasn't go for rhyme. I will take everything you guys said and work on this poem. Stupidiot92

This is my sixth chapter that i just wrote so it isn't that good SO PLEASE COMMENT :D :) :( :o :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: ...

This is my first chapter that i have edited please comment :!: :D Chapter 1 The Invasion On a heavily forested island called Pire Island, a thief and a murderer ...

I like how this story is starting to unfold. I caught one thing i didn't like so much. Quote: “Why, hello, Creiha! I am Markus Sranglion. We were beginning to ...

hey nick i don't think you should give this story up you can do alot with it even though it is based off of an historical figure

Very good though i caught a few things Quote: until movement on the edges of the clearing [u]interrupted surprised[u] her change one of those verbs to either interrupted or surprised ...

The Cries of War BY: MICHAEL RIST War is a sorrowful thing For in it are the cries of battle Which brings fear to chaos. The cries of war have ...

Here is the last chapter i have typed up so far please comment i am proud of it :!: Chapter 5 The Gift “Did Sendoma say where he was going ...

Here is chap 4 of my book its shorter than the others please comment :!: Chapter 4 The Dream Rone woke up and noticed two things. First, his body was ...