strawberrywine

Hi, I have a confession to make about my story Diary. It is only based on true events. I had to change a few things around because I was afraid ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Hi, I liked someone else to crtic my story Diary. It's under non-fiction. -steph

Hi, I really liked your piece. I really love books about NYC from some reason. They really attract me. I Loved everything. I liked how you described the lady. I ...

It's obvious that it is Romeo and Juliet. I mean, they did kill them selves. It was their choice to die or not. Are you doing this play in school? ...

Nice Try. I would try to fix it up before posting it. Try to make it more interesting so you can draw people in. -steph

Really? That's weird? Maybe we were like twins separated at birth. Lol. I bet your monster isn't as bad as mine. -steph

Hi, This has all been moved under my lakegirls account. -Nicole Hi, I have a confession to make about my story Diary. It is only based on true events. I ...

Hi, You could critc my work. I really need someone to fix up my grammar. I'm not sure if that will work. If not it's called Diary, EDITED. Under non-fiction. ...

we caught it and ate it while at...

Hi, I mostly like to write novels and short stories. I have only summited one thing, which was non-fiction, but I guess that is kind of like a novel. What ...

Hi, I know. It seems like fiction. Some of things are so horrible. I really want to show people but I'm afraid to show someone that I know, besides Kate, ...

Hello, I am also new to YWS. I really liked your story. It is so true about secrets and pinky swears. The only 100% way that your sure that no ...

Wow, Your story left me in tears. I love it. It was amazing. I have never read anything like this before. Very well done. I didn't see anything wrong. I ...

Hi, This poem was very short. I liked it though. I liked the way you described it. You could write more to it, make it longer. You could do so ...