strawberrypop13

Oops, i accidentally deleted my previous poem, so I'll put it at the end of this message. Just to let ya'll know, I couldn't continue with this as I was ...

Day 4! :) (oh, and I apologise for the shabbiness of yesterdays, I was very pushed for time!) Kookaburra Calling Old Man Kookaburra sits in his tree Calling, and calling ...

Day 3? :? Financial Gain Coins dropping, falling. Plinking against a counter. Notes, scrumpled Fall with a whisper. Clattering- -swish. Why do we depend on money so? (This was written ...

Day 2 :) Fault It's your fault. You say it's always my fault. It's your fault when I muck up When I don't say the right thing When I cry. ...

Wow... quite simply wow! These are so incredibly beautiful, I totally agree with everyone else as to how amazing they are! I think that the first one is definately my ...

Wow... this is so good! It really sums up love, every aspect of it, from the crazy to the normal, right through. :) I can't see any obvious spelling or ...

Wow! I am a big fan of comical poetry (although I can't write it at all XD ) and this was absolutely amazing! I couldn't find anything wrong with it, ...

Wow.. this poem is so beautiful! It tells the story really well, and doesn't go overboard on imagery or description like some poems tend to do. You kept it at ...

Wow... this poem is so good! There are no grammar or spelling mistakes that I can see, and it flows really well. It's quite a strange and unexpected poem, but ...

Okay, poem number 1! I know I'm starting quite late, but if i write a poem every day i can still do it :smt001 Beauty (working title, help!) Eyes rimmed ...

Hi! I must say, I think this is really beautiful. I love the words you use, especially the really descriptive ones that are almost extinct in writing nowadays, sadly. One ...

This is so good! I actually can't find any bits I don't like, although I agree with purplegirl14 about the capitals at the starts of lines. I think that this ...

Hey olubunni! I thought that your poem was quite good, but I think that it has some points that could do with improving. Firstly, I agree with TheNewHero as to ...

Hi! I must say, I thought that this poem was really good! I loved the description, and think that it is a brilliant idea for a poem. This really made ...

Wow! This is really helpful, thankyou so much! I ill definately use this when I write, I tend to get really stuck when I do descriptions! :) Just one question: ...