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Oh wow, I really liked this :) I loved how the character of Pete was talking about the fly. I loved the amout of imagry that is used and the ...

Hey there, I love the idea behind this poem :) However, It's a bit hard to focus on anything because of the way it jumps around. I get what you ...

I really liked this! however, in my opinion you were telling too much in the beginning so it kind of made it seem like it just kept going...mayve try describing ...

i quite like this :) looking forward to the rest of the chapters great job!

I think it's a really good poem :) I love how discriptive you are especially in the beginning well done :)

This is really good :) great job :)

I really love this poem. It's so beautiful and it really flows :) I think you should maybe extend it... because It's really good so far :)

Hey I love this idea. It's really captivating (to me). I also feel like this could be longer, because to me it sounds like a beginning and I think you ...

hey I honestly really love the first one :) and the dog website thing awesome works! :)

Wow, I really like this :) I'm definatly going to read more of it :)

I ran around the corner and found myself on a deserted street. The houses on either side of the road were dark and lifeless. I heard a sudden howl behind ...