strangeshellie

i ran, mostly because that was what everyone else was doing. Trying to find a place to hide. I cross the empty street and climbed the tall metal gates of ...

Awh, thank you lovelies (:

Is this it? Will it always end like this? Why am I afraid? To keep going. The past has changed my point of view. Go ahead, Say you’ll be different. ...

I quite enjoyed reading this (: Its a really lovely poem that keeps you wondering in a way... (don't know if that made sense...) It's really beautifully written! great job!

other than a few errors here and there this is really good! (:

other than the grammatical errors, this is really beautifully written! great job!

DUDE! i love this! the flow and the imagry is great! It kept me reading, which is good. It was also beautifully written! (:

Wow! i actually enjoyed reading this (: i love your unique writing style, it makes it interesting to read! (:

dude i love it. its beautiful (: I love the emotion in it and the flow of the poem is really good great job!

Thanks guys! (:

Running out of oxygen inside a hospital room The fear of what comes next lingers in the depths of your mind You start screaming but the only sound heard is ...

Thanks guys I will definatly take the advice you all have given me (:

She’s sorry she can’t trust, That’s something she’ll have to rise above. She’s sorry things aren’t what you planned She has trouble making her mind up. She’s sorry there’s a ...

wow! dude! i love it (: i think this is my new favourate of yours :D its really great and the emotion behind it shows strongly. great job (:

thanks for the reviews :) this was just a random scribbled draft so i will definatly take the advice and work on it more :)