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Actually, I posted here for a little while a few years ago but never really got to know anyone. Anyway, I've been writing again lately, and I thought "how wonderful ...

I enjoy the conversational tone of this. It works really well for the, uh, suject of the piece, and you were able to make it sound like you (the narrator) ...

This kind of sounds like an ad against drunk driving or something...you know...the ones where they tell the story about how, "Mary had never been to a party before. She ...

I read Narnia for the first time last year...talk about a deprived childhood. I love C.S. Lewis. The Dawn Treader is my favorite...the part where Aslan is peeling off Eustace's ...

So I was on here a fair amount last summer, but abandoned YWS when school started. Well it's summer again and I am back!

Happy Birthday! Mine was yesterday.

The fourth stanza particularly, I would break that stanza into three or possibly even four lines. I wouldn't have thought of its a good thing you thought of it for ...

Great stuff. Reads at a great pace. Amusing at times and intense at others. I'm very interested in learning more about Barduev. Your description, while simple, has managed to say ...

...I fell in love with Levin...he just had all those...agricultural reports and stuff.

Let's see...I've read Tess of the D'Urbervilles , Jude the Obscure , The return of the Native , and The Mayor of Casterbridge , as well as some of his ...

Good stuff. Nice images and tone. Also great that its not all about you. Poetry can sometimes be an excuse to rant about our problems, have you noticed? Its challenging ...

Poor Imp: Thanks! haha I was saying Karen- eena !

I love this book. I'm a huge Thomas Hardy fan, and this is my favorite written by him. I did a book report on it last year. Gabriel Oak is ...

Alright. So here is my first attempt at poetry in over a year. More of a whim than a serious attempt. I'm posting it mainly so I can know what ...

something – merely misshapen, mishandled and now appearing similar, no longer dis- At first I thought, "what?!" So then I proceeded to read the poem over a few more times. ...