steward

Ok, so like what you said, it was strange; but unlike what you said, it was really good., :) Weird though how this 'Rat' or 'Tim' keeps showing up, though ...

Okay, that was really nice., :) You did a great job showing us how cruel everyone but Willow was., You also made the atmosphere really depressing, which in my opinion, ...

So, hi faithless., :) Welcome to YWS., Great start for your novel, no introductions, no spoilers, not even the gender of our narrator, nothing to show but what's happening NOW... ...