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Re: Highschool Love - not actual title yet!
Revised edition It was a Monday. The last Monday of August. I sat in my pink, fluffy computer chair gazing outside into the backyard. I was watching the rain fall ...
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Re: We are Poets
Hello there July, I really enjoyed your poem. It was deep, simple, to the point and easy to understand. I am not big on poetry myself, probably because I can ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #2)
Hello again. i previouls reviewed your first draft of this writing and I enjoyed both of the pieces. I do altough enjoy this one a lot more. There is not ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)
Well first off I want to say that I really enjoyed this. It grabbed my attention right away. It is definitely something that I think I would be interested in ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Highschool Love
Chapter 1 – The End to Summer, The Start to a New Friendship It was a Monday. The last Monday of August. I, seventeen year old Zoey Parker, sat in ...
Jul 19, 2010
