starrynight89

First sentences are always really important and even if you're planning to change the way you open your story post your first sentences in bold :) For inspiration, I opened ...

I forget who said this but, I totally agree. I can't write with the red underline everywhere. I just cant! But, here's a tip, turn your spell check off until ...

Finally's its here. the tension, the anxiety all building up to this day.. so, how is everyone doing? 2,245 :D and u? happy writing, *night

Thank you! here's my username starrynight89 I think they disabled the author search so, can you guys give me a link to your page? The site is being hit w/ ...

Oh, so useful..Thank you mizz-iceberg.. It's so hard to identity cliches and this is just really needed.. :D *night

Well the subject says it all. I just dont think I can make it without some support...anyone interested? *night

TWO DAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Let me give u a line by line analyis before telling you how I feel about the whole thing. my edits are in bold :) “Steel met bone," "A viscous ...

Yes I agree with mizz-iceberg, this story would flow a lot better, not to mention look better if it's written as a script. I'll do a line by line analysis ...

Hey I downloaded your story and will get back to you soon! :)

Aww, Thank you! I know my chapters are rather long....would you like me to review any of your work?

I'm going to play devil's advocate here. I agree with the fact that songs are great sources of inspiration for plot and character development. For example, you're listening to a ...

Really? I guess I have to pick another term then..Actually come to think of it, I think I have heard the term Seer too...oh well, thanks for the input.. :) ...

Ok, so I think I'd better explain this a bit more before just pasting this excerpt. Background Info : Lisa Rubin thougt she had a rather mundane lifestyle until her ...

It's hard to pick out which books are cliche and which aren't because it's up to the author on how he/she presents the character. I mean, every fantasy novel has ...