starrynight89

Well, here it is. I was contemplating on whether I should put it online but, I realized that feedback is a wonderful thing, so if you can spare a few ...

Wow , that's all I can say! It was beautiful and the MC is just a delight to read. I could feel her fury with every line and her mannerisms ...

Hi there, Just thought I'd leave a review..sorry if it isn't up to the mark, I haven't been around yws for a while. I will give you my general thoughts ...

I didnt write today :( .....*cries*

Ohh, snoink, a catchy phrase to start off with! makes me want to read more! drop a link, I am intrigued.

Oh, love this idea!! :D My music choice is kind of weird...hehe, I listen to a lot of classical and wordless music while writing. 1) Sayuri Theme-Memoirs of a Geisha ...

Thanks, but mind you, it's not that great!

7,557 Might right more later tonight but, I'm writing out of that allowed? Anyway, there is NO way I can work on it tomorrow. one word: Homework *cries* good luck ...

Big bad, nice one..didnt really look into spelling but: Prophesy-->Prophecy! Other than that: nice plot and I agree with mantis, show us, dont tell us. Keep going!

Oh! thank you Swottielottie for making this :) I need a place where I can rant about my Nano..ok, well I like the plot and the characters but..I'm not writing ...

Again, don't waste time looking at the grammar and spelling, this is for my nano, so....just tell me what you think about the idea It was half-past-twelve and the Lake ...

I'm getting week one blues...:(...I dont even want to think about week two..

woot, good job Suzy! :) I'm at 5969 The night is young.

Thank you all for your feedback..I totally forgot about the gender issue..oops..will change it immediately..again, thank you so much! :)

As a prologue, it fulfills it's purpose. I'm not going to go into grammar and spelling checks unless you want me to? Didn't catch anything major..except dieing-->dying.