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Re: Awkward Meeting [Edited]
Squallz, Thank you for your comment! And you seemed to have caught my weakness: characterization. It's just hard so, I've decided not to post anymore until I've gotten to know ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Awkward Meeting [Edited]
Thanks the kind words bbb!! This draft is far from perfection but, I'm glad you think it's really good!! Bye, --starry.
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: There's Something About Jerry
Eek! Sorry for the double post, how did that happen? Oh and you're welcome! :D
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Blue Eyes, Black Dragon
Hi there, Just wanted to leave a review. Hope you don't mind that I attach my reviews when the posts are long; it's just neater that way :) PM with ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: There's Something About Jerry
Part Two cont. In the store there was only a few people. I had been telling the truth about finding a book. I needed to find one by Monday and ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: There's Something About Jerry
Part Two cont. In the store there was only a few people. I had been telling the truth about finding a book. I needed to find one by Monday and ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Struggling to come up with a title ( prologue)
Hi there! Just stopped by to review. Just PM me if you have any comments, questions or concerns regarding my review!! :) And, you're off to a good start but ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Moved: Frequency (updated: 12/19/07)
There you go bigbad! I haven't gotten to chapter Two but I shall post that up when I do. Let me know if you can't open the file for some ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Wedding's Suck - Novel. - Chapter Two Up.
Hey there, Just thought I'd leave a review! You seem like a newbie so welcome to YWS! PM with any questions, comments or concerns regarding my review. Take Care, --starry ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Fabled (Book 1)
Hello! I hope you don't mind that I attached your review. You do have Word, right? If not, let me know and I'll try and post it here. Also, PM ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Awkward Meeting [Edited]
Thank you so much for review, kokobeans! And I tried to fix the mistakes...anyone else?
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Raene -I need an actual title, not my main character's name.
Prologue: Rain One dark night, as a storm raged overhead, a carriage made its way along the road through the K ingdom of Valeria towards the city. The passenger had ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Awkward Meeting [Edited]
An excerpt from my, er, new venture. I'd love any feedback but, I'm in the process of getting to know my characters..so, what do you think about Rohan (the MC) ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Such Is Poetry.
It was beautiful and constructed so well. Many times, I have seen poems start out with a theme but defer off track along the way and end up somewhere else. ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Charminar Blues
Thanks for the review Bigbad! And I understand what you mean about getting the MC's thoughts out more..thanks again!
Dec 29, 2007