starrgazer

I think it's pretty good so far. You did a good job of drawing readers in with the first paragraph. So is this the first part of your novel? If ...

Hey welcome!! I totally get how you feel; when I found this site, I was also thrilled that I finally found somewhere to review and be reviewed. If you have ...

Contrary to what others said, it was very clear to me that Johanna was a stillborn(...awkward if that wasn't the case...). The adjectives and descriptions you wrote really crystallized all ...

For the last 2 months or so, I've had this sudden obsession with anime for really no reason whatsoever. I drew some sketches and I just wanted to share them. ...

When I saw the man, I was like whoa. When I saw the bear, I was like OH MY GOD THAT IS SO GOOD!! Your shading is excellent and it ...

This is a great piece that A LOT of people can relate to. I totally agree with many things you said. People who you've met for just a few minutes ...

hey welcome! The site offers a lot of people who would gladly give you reviews and feedback so it'll greatly improve your writing. I look forward to reading your work. ...

I like how it rhymes and its very easy to understand. Its pretty good for your first poem. One thing you may want to focus on is playing around with ...

heyy, welcome! First of all, I LOVE u name :P. Ok so anyways, i'm also pretty new and looking for new friends so i'd lov to be yours :) Hopefully ...

hey there :) Welcome! You are going to love it here; its a great place to share your stories. I'm also somewhat new here and looking for someone to give ...

love how its going so far :) One thing, could you add a little more description of the guy or the main character? That'll help us get a better visual ...

hi shannie, welcome to yws:) I also love to write (I have tons of different random dribbles saved on my computer) and this is a great place to get your ...

heyy, welcome to YWS:D This is a great site to share literature and honestly, I think this is one of the best sites out there for us. I'm also newish ...

heyy!! Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you are going to have an amazing time here :) I'm also new here and I look forward to reading some of your stories. ...

Hi, so like almost everyone else here, I'm a newbie who joined a few days ago when I just happened to stumble across this welcome mat. I'm hoping to meet ...