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  • Poetry » General, General Re: wish i were a ghost

    thank you!

    Jan 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: wish i were a ghost

    It's about being interested in people and wanting to understand them better, while at the same time seeking to be understood and wanting to step outside my skin into someone ...

    Jan 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: wish i were a ghost

    Thank you, I actually didn't capitalize on purpose because I like how it looks (I read a lot of e.e. cummings) thanks for the input :)

    Jan 23, 2013


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge