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Re: "Voice" Chapter 1. here it is, what do you think o
Wow. It sure took me a long time to get on here to review. But I understand why, so it's okay. I'm not much of a nit-picking kind of guy. ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Forked
I learned about human nature in taste-looking land. You can learn too. Let's do it. (())(())(()(())(()) It's not classy to begin everything with words. When people just start talking to ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: I'm sick of "hello people"
Seriously guys, name your topic something less stupid. Stupid. I am staples. Because whenever my friends say we should go somewhere I always say, "staplestoo". yeah I like to write ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: The Flame Assassin~Chapter I:Encounters
I know you said you don't expect a long review with how long this is, but this is too long to even read in one sitting. You're going to have ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Swamp Creature (Chapter 1)
I had felt a storm coming. I could smell the rain. The air was warm and thick with moisture. Earlier that morning, my bones ached and I had a little ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Worry, Fear and Pain.
I liked it. Here are a few grammar punctuation problems before I say more. The light from the surrounding city gave the park trees phantom like shadows that changed with ...
Nov 14, 2008
